New song, any good?

[Poxican]

Hi chaps
I started this last weekend and I've spent a while today double tracking the rhythm guitar. It's missing bass, drums and vocals, but I guess the song is there.

I know it still sounds quite rough but I'd really appreciate your thoughts!
Be as brutal as you like

It's the file called [edit] removed because I realised the rendered mp3 sounded nothing like it did in the DAW wtf....

[M.T.Pilot]

in all honesty, I would have waited with posting this song until it was finished. Why not? Add the bass, drums, and the vox, then post it. I'm finding it hard to comment on it in the unfinished state it is in now..

cheers,

M.T.Pilot

[Poxican]

Originally Posted by M.T.Pilot

in all honesty, I would have waited with posting this song until it was finished. Why not? Add the bass, drums, and the vox, then post it. I'm finding it hard to comment on it in the unfinished state it is in now..

cheers,

M.T.Pilot

I was kind of just hoping for some comments on the vibe, tone and such. That said, I listened to the mp3 I'd uploaded and it sounded nothing like it did in the DAW.... The timing seemed off and the mix all fucked up. Any idea why this would be?

[M.T.Pilot]

Originally Posted by Poxican

I was kind of just hoping for some comments on the vibe, tone and such. That said, I listened to the mp3 I'd uploaded and it sounded nothing like it did in the DAW.... The timing seemed off and the mix all fucked up. Any idea why this would be?

hmmm... no... rendering to mp3 usually does nothing to the timing... The mix might sound a bit diffeernt, though.. but not that much different, i think... What sequencer did you use?