New tracks want opinions

[soundtechdan]

hi guys

I have recently got off my ass and made some new tracks. The mixes are rough and the arrangement need work on but I want opinions on just the general sound. I would like people to be critical as I like these track so I want to do the best job I can. Anything would help cheers.

myspace.com/tiredofbeingboring

cheers

i-spy

[spawn]

mellow, serene, easy going, nice cool


would like to hear more please..

let me know....

[soundtechdan]

I will try and get them to you as soon as possible cheers

[MagnumC]

nice.. good job.. keep it up..

[Ten Flew South]

Really nice.

i can do something else is great, nice mix and soundset, but lacks some variation.

Just a song is good, very Air-esque, drums are a bit weak on that one, it's the weakest track overall, but it's still decent.

The 'Unknown' tracks are the highlight for me though, can't place the guitar sample you've used for the first one even though it's hauntingly familiar (and I'm assuming it's a sample!).
Lovely track.
The second one is really good too. Crying out for a vocal this one, à la Saint Etienne.

Great stuff.

[soundtechdan]

thanks for listening. I know I need to work on arrangement of the music and my mixing can always do with work but sorry I can't do vocals, bad singer.

might try and look for someone, if anyone fancies adding vocals to the tracks or remixing any just let me know and I'll be more than happy to let you free on the tracks.

cheers for the comments keep them coming and I'll keep you posted.

cheers

i-spy

[Ten Flew South]

Nice offer. Would like to do something with 'I can do something else', which is nice and apt!

Drop me a PM with transfer info, cheers

[Hypagen]

I like the sounds going on in these tracks, but they don't sound finished with regards to arrangement and content, they kind of stay on the same level too long, try dropping parts out and bringing them back in to add interest, maybe adding a bassline.

[Jonni]

yeah i agree with hypagen more variety would be good but for a "rough" mix it sounds pretty darn good

[soundtechdan]

yer I know I have said before but cheers for listening I'll keep you up dated